A Tough Decision - Request

Request for , who asked for a scene from our RPG. So, this is what I came up with... I don't nkow if I really like it but this is litterally the 10th time I've tried redrawing it. X.x

Okay, so the story behind this is: My OC, Hyuga Mia, and 's OC, Tarot were on a mission. Well, it went horribly wrong and Mia basically had to leave Tarot (who was really wounded) behind in order to save this little girl, Rayne, who turned out to be Tarot's little sister (although Mia didn't know that at the time..). So she promises Tarot that she'll come back for him and you know... that kinda thing.
So, Rayne is who Mia is holding, btw.

Mia (C) Me
Tarot (C)
Rayne (C) & Me.